Fat Love
I always fall for the wrong people,
This is my mistake.
People who never love me,
people who want me to break.
So I ask myself why try?
Why lie that love will save the day?
Why be ignored by another rake?
I would rather have a steak.
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Very cute.
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Thanks, Tony!
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having a steak instead of having a man who always tries to break is cool…
enjoy your dinner.
love your fun lines.
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Thanks, Chelsea. Rare to medium rare!
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a fun verse, very well done….
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Thanks, I’m glad you liked it!
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Friggin’ sweet!
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Thank you, A.B!
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Transparent and vulnerable – good words almost always are!
Way to go! Fun
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Thank, Dr sana!
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powerful perceptions.
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Thanks, Ben hi, hi!
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love your style of argument,
well done valentine!
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Hope you had a good Valentine’s Day and thanks!
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precicious.
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Thanks, Emily!
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hello,
do you recall thursday poets rally,
there is an award for you this week of 80,
please find our link and participate for week 81 next week.
lovely art and story talent, keep posting.
do visit your comment makers and enjoy your peers’ poetry.
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