Big Ms. Lisa sat on her toilet
after eating pancakes of flour and milk,
When along came a creature just then to meet her
hanging from unseen silk.
She closed her blue orbs, almost frightened away,
for vision she was partial to everyday.
“What the hell was that?” asked Ms. Lisa to her three sisters: Me, Myself, and I.
“Maybe it was an angry bee,” she said to Me, who did not disagree.
“Mighta been a ‘skeeter,” offered Myself, eyeing I.
I said, “It ain’t neither. Wonder if we have some pie?”
Ms. Lisa dared to look herself and what did she see?
A spider in mid air, from the coils of Big Lisa’s big hair.
Ms. Lisa knew what had to be done,
and instead of run she grabbed a book
for the spider to be took.
Spider, however, had other desires,
book seat declined, he decided instead to go into its spine.
Ms. Lisa then divined that it takes much time
to free a spider when he otherwise is inclined.
dark humor.
super piece…you rock, thanks for coming…..
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dark humor.
super piece…you rock, thanks for coming…..
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Thank you for the invite and visiting!
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That photo is going to give me nightmares. 🙂
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Hey Leese!
I see a theme today on the blogosphere.
The Loon has a penis museum, Lisa is sittin’ on the crapper, and Jammer5 is leaving turd-bombs in his basement…..
SEE. See what I been missing all these months?
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Humor and wit.
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lol, its funny…you all are
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If the spider looked like that, I can understand Miss Muffet’s reaction.
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Spiders are the worst! You managed to find humor in what would have been a horror movie situation for me.
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I love dark humor! Nice job.
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Oh, this was fabulous! *shivers* The itty bitty spiders get caught in a cup and put outside at my house… if they are big or hair though, they meet the bottom of a shoe…
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Wow!!
You really are a good poet!! Never read something like this!! Your flow seems to be simple, easy to understand with no-nonsense rhyming!!
Looking forward to read more and more from you
CatchyTips for Writers
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A very cheeky piece! Loved it!
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I really enjoyed this creative piece of poetry! A wonderful work!
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I wonderful, beautiful twist on this classic rhyme. I really enjoyed reading this with its lovely dark twists.
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Thank you! I was inspired by a spider that morning. I finally got him outside and jiggled him out of the book.
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Great poem Lisa. Somewhat different from the standard version. Your post came up in my Zemanta related articles thingy
http://tmcomics.com/2011/03/18/miss-muffet-revisited-again/
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